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No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by IrishAssult on April 1st 2010, 8:33 pm

so i got bored and start this but i wanted you guys to add onto it and fix it up if you want:
No Mercy
By: ColdHaze

Chapter One:
The Apartments
“Is that a helicopter?” Louis Asked.
“I think it is, Louis.” Bill said.
“For all those personnel who are alive, please meet at Mercy hospital for evacuation. I repeat please proceed to mercy hospital for evacuation.” The Helicopter Pilot Shouted over the Microphone.
“Well we got some machine guns and shotguns here.” Zoey Said.
“There’s four Health Kits as well.” Louis pointed out.
“Everyone grab a gun and a health pack, I don’t know how long this will be.” Said Bill
As they went down the stairs into the first room of the apartment building, they saw tons of zombies all different sizes.
“Ewww, I’m covered in blood” Zoey yelled.
Louis told Zoey “ha ha ha, get used to it zoey it seems like a long ride.”
“God Damn it” said Zoey.

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Drumrush7 on April 2nd 2010, 7:49 pm

As they continue through the apartments, the survivors realize that some infected have special abilities(hence the idea of Special Infected).
"What the hell was that?" Francis said
"It just pounced me out of nowhere. It's as if though he was on a hunt" Bill said
"Hey! Maybe we should come up with names for the specials." Louis said
"Sounds like a plan. With that in mind, what are we going to name this one?" Zoey said
"The Hunter. Stalks his prey, pounces them, then rapes them." Bill said
"You just had to joke about rape didn't you?" Zoey said
"Yes, yes I did." Bill said
So the name for their first special was decided.

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Cr4 on July 8th 2010, 8:25 pm

Mean while after deciding special infected was the name, the survivors went on thru the the apartments and come on a big littleing thing.
''What the fuck is this?'' Bill said
''It just keep coming and were shooting it over a thousand times'' Zoey says we should keep moving and shooting it'' Bill said
''Sound's like a plan to me after them shooting at tank they decided to add that to the special infected list'' Francis said god damn I hate them tanker's I hope we don't meet another one on along of are way out of this apartment'' Louis said
Why don't we got up these stairs?'' Francis said
''God damn I hate stairs why did you pick this way Louis?'' Louis said
''It' the only way I could find out of the apartment'' Now the survivors are on the the top of the apartment building.


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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Xrenzco on July 8th 2010, 8:46 pm

Cr4 wrote:Mean while after deciding special infected was the name, the survivors went on thru the the apartments and come on a big littleing thing.
''What the fuck is this?'' Bill said
''It just keep coming and were shooting it over a thousand times'' Zoey says we should keep moving and shooting it'' Bill said
''Sound's like a plan to me after them shooting at tank they decided to add that to the special infected list'' Francis said god damn I hate them tanker's I hope we don't meet another one on along of are way out of this apartment'' Louis said
Why don't we got up these stairs?'' Francis said
''God damn I hate stairs why did you pick this way Louis?'' Louis said
''It' the only way I could find out of the apartment'' Now the survivors are on the the top of the apartment building.


Why would they go up, their suppose to go down.

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Drumrush7 on July 8th 2010, 10:02 pm

(Recovery)
Realizing that they went the wrong way, the gang decide to question themselves.
"Why the fuck did we go this way?" Louis said.
"We had to assume someone was leading the way. Who wanted to go this way anyway?" Bill said.
"Me!" Zoey says out of nowhere.
"And that is why you never trust women to follow directions." Francis said.
The gang was too busy arguing that they didn't notice that Zoey was tonged by a mutated infected.
Luckily Francis was able to save her in time.
"Are you okay?" Francis said.
"Yeah" said Zoey.
"What was that bitch?" said Louis.
"I'd say... a smoker! It leaves behind green smoke and 'smokes' people from a safe vantage point."
So the smokers name came to existence.

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Cr4 on July 9th 2010, 10:46 am

Mean while they are realizing there are gun's on the table.
''Guns over here'' Said Bill
''Every body grab a gun'' Said Louis
''We should head up some more'' Said Zoey
''Sure why not'' Said Francis
''Hey we can make it out, but we gotta open this door'' Bill said
''Warning opening this will cause lot of noises'' Francis Said
''But we have to open to get where were going'' Said Zoey
''Get ready'' Said Bill
''The door is open'' By Louis

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Drumrush7 on July 9th 2010, 11:59 am

An alarm sounds upon opening the door; they knew the horde was coming.
"Shit, shit, shit, shit! They're coming" Louis said.
"Run like hell!" Zoey said. (familiar?)
"Um, Zoey? I don't think were going anywhere." Bill said.
The horde came from all directions. The were almost surrounded.
Suddenly, a growl from a mile away could be heard.
The sound kept getting closer, and the streets were rumbling.
A mutated freak with huge muscles punched several infected to get to the survivors, but what could it be?

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Cr4 on July 9th 2010, 1:36 pm

''Shit it's the big thing that tried to kill zoey when we first got on the apartment'' Said Francis
''Shit, Shit, Shit!'' said Louis
''Keep shooting'' Said Bill
The horde keep comeing from all directions.
''PipeBomb!'' Zoey throw the pipe bomb
The zombies all stoped and ran towards the nose.
''I told you this would save are asses sooner or later'' Said Zoey
Mean while the horde stoped coming tank was coming until Bill shoot it one last time it fall before his feet.
''Let's get out of here'' Said Louis
''Here's a door with bar's on it what could it be?'' Said Zoey

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Xrenzco on July 9th 2010, 2:33 pm

" I think its what they call a safe room " Bill said
" Yeah, I've heard about that in the office once" Louis replied
" Its suppose to be a room where survivors stay until they have to go somewhere... well that's what one of my favorite professors told me... until he turned....." zoey said
"Zoey don't cry now" Francis said
" That's not me crying" zoey replied
As the survivors realized someone is in the safe room, they approach the safe room door.
When they opened the door, they saw someone crying on the floor
" are you okay ? " Zoey ask
Until the survivors realize it was a .......

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Re: No Mercy Chapter 1

Post by Cr4 on July 9th 2010, 2:57 pm

''Witch!'' Siad Bill
''Light's off'' Said Bill
''Move very fast and stick close to me'' Said Bill
''All right'' Said Zoey Francis and Loius
''Grr Growl'' The Witch went
''Don't move'' Said Bill
''Shes geting angry as fuck'' Said Francis
''Let's get to the saferoom before she attack use'' Said Zoey
''Run, Run, Run!'' Said Louis
''We have a long run to get to the safe house'' Said Zoey
The Witch went running after Louis, he closed the door behind him
''I think we are safe now'' Said Louis
''Bam! the door is falling apart'' Said Bill
''Run and Shoot! Run and Shoot!'' Said Louis
The Witch isnt stoping for nothing she finally hit's Louis with her long ass nails Louis fall's on the ground the Witch comes up for some air than goes in for the kill She's hiting Louis Until Bill hit her with the Chrome ShotGun in her head she dies.
''Shit, Shit, Shit! that bitch made me bleed with one blow to the body'' Said Louis
''I think we should called that InCapped one hit mean's your InCapped'' Said Bill Zoey and Francis
''Let's hit the safe house and get some extra thing's on are long ass way out of this crazy ass town'' Said the Survivors


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